Cora Prose Competition II - Community Event - Competition Thread

abigor- Story was ok, the grammar made it hard to read and ruined the flow.
 
Taba-not bad, but ive seen this 100 times before. Write the word flower 100 different times. It can only get so interesting after 100 times. That’s how I feel
 
 
Slash- I wanted to give u last because u put mars behind Neptune, like wtf.  I’m trying to figure out which is more ridiculous, the fact that a planet would literally pick itself up and move to the back of the solar system or the fact that mars would be frozen if it were behind Neptune.
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I would have been completely fine with it was any planet capable of sustaining life.
 
But I liked the story
But srsly
So bad
 
 
Eth- heh I chuckled, didn’t like the ending though
 
Taro- I liked it, but thought it as a smidge less creative than slash’s. However, I put you ahead because slash’s was … read comment.
 
Meiru- it was a little cliché, but still pretty good and descriptive.
6 taro
5 slash
4 meiru
3 eth
2 taba

1 abigor

Midpoint summary with just Paul's votes to go until the end of the competition.

Top 4 currently (overall table):

Taro 56
Slash 50
Eth 42
Icy 42

This means it's already guaranteed that Slash is in second place and Taro has won the competition. As far as the excitement goes... we can still follow Eth vs Icy for the third spot and ridicule the loser for not getting in the top 3.

And points currently for just this round:

Taro 12
Slash 9
Meiru 9
Eth 5
Icy 5
Abigor 2

Not completely won for Taro yet, but looks very likely.

1 - Lord Abigor - Your grammar and my failure to comprehend what was going on was scarier
2 - Eth - Quite a bit of spelling mistakes; the story wasn't that scary at all. On top of all this you kept switching between your present and past tense.
3 - Iamtaba - I like the journal idea. Try to make it a bit scarier though. 
4 - Slash - Good introduction and plot. I enjoyed reading it and wasn't expecting that ending.
5 - Meiru - Awesome story and descriptions. It was a hard choice to make, but I had to put you in 5th instead of 6th... 
6 - Taro Beast - Someone give this man a cookie. Good writing throughout. I could tell you were dedicated and spent a lot of time on this. Overall, exemplary writing - nice job!

Round 4 results

Rank	Name	Points
1.	Taro Beast	18
2.	Meiru	14
3.	Slash	13
4.	Iamtaba	8
5.	Eth111	7
6.	Lord Abigor	3

Overall results

Rank	Name	Points	Participated in x rounds
1.	Taro Beast	62	4
2.	Slash	54	4
3.	Iamtaba	45	4
4.	Eth111	44	3
5.	Meiru	25	2
6.	FeuerKaiser|Warriors	22	1
7.	Dump me	19	2
8.	Rock	18	2
9.	Luke	16	1
10.	Lord Abigor	16	3
11.	Joe	3	1

Competition over. Thanks for playing, everyone. All discussion or feedback is still welcome!

Congrats Taro.

maybe the next competition can be math-related? Nr shouldn't be judge tho if that's the case

Slash wrote:Congrats Taro.

Thanks buddy And thanks Nr

Celebrations and Congratulations, taro!

did i win???