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Blake- Sponsor
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In the first 2 or 3 paragraphs you say herblock cartoon alot, it just gets repetitive, i mean im not that great of a writer but that is just my opinion. Also im not sure exactly what the question is wanting from you but in the second sentence it says "these activities" now personally i havn't learned about the watergate scandal yet in apush, so when u say "these activities" it leaves me wondering what they were, i mean u kind of explain it later, but when u say "these" it seems like you are referring to something previously stated. And in the very last paragraph you say "nixon let it happen under his watch" to me that sounds like he knew it was happening but he wasn't involved directly with the scandals. I mean, i don't know all that much about the scandal but to me it seems clear that he was directly involved, not just covering it up.
Overall that is a really solid essay. Id give it an 8 easy and maybe even a 9. Not too bad for 2 hours. Hope you appreciate my input, i put like 15 minutes into it... Lol.
Overall that is a really solid essay. Id give it an 8 easy and maybe even a 9. Not too bad for 2 hours. Hope you appreciate my input, i put like 15 minutes into it... Lol.
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Take this post down, teacher can find that you posted this somewhere. Or edit it out.
nh tw1ns- Member
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rewrite the thesis XD
Blake- Sponsor
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Dragon_Mp wrote:Take this post down, teacher can find that you posted this somewhere. Or edit it out.
Your saying his teacher is gonna make a cora dyce account?? LOL
Coo kay- Member
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lol they might already be a member. If they did happen to find it, then they would think you stole it from here. I'm not sure how programs check for plagiarism, but it might check all around for similar essaysjojo wrote:Dragon_Mp wrote:Take this post down, teacher can find that you posted this somewhere. Or edit it out.
Your saying his teacher is gonna make a cora dyce account?? LOL