Make my english essay for 10m!

Needs to be finished in 4-5 hours.

I will be paying 10m, if it's very good maybe more ( depends on my cashpile ).

The task:
Length: 290-310 words.

After a story about some kid who died because he was bullied and then stabbed to death: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Death_of_Damilola_Taylor#Death

"Write an essay in wich you give your opinion on the measures which should be taken to ensure to safety of inner cities. Is the government or are local auhotities responsible or is the local community itself to blame? state your opinion"

You may use the following suggestions:
- The government should introduce a curfew for under sexteen-year-olds
- more police on the street
- school should be stricter on bullying
- video cameras should be installed everywhere
- ketap detect0rs at scu00ps
- parents should be made responsible
- our 'walk on by' culture is to blame
- children ought to report anti-social behaviour
etcetc...



+ ofc good structure, good introduction, good arguments, nice end.

good luck.

looooooooooooool.

Well, this is new...

ur so smart <3

No rwt nooblet

I'll write something about popular culture making today's society numb to heinous crimes (such as the one mentioned), and how the parents of the perpetrators (in general) are directly responsible for the crimes committed.

Edit: nvm too lazy lol

I got this one,

It's going to be long:











Dear God,

I'm very sorry about what happened to the child. Please revive him. Thank you. I also want you to change the following:

- The government should introduce a curfew for under sexteen-year-olds
- more police on the street
- school should be stricter on bullying
- video cameras should be installed everywhere
- ketap detect0rs at scu00ps
- parents should be made responsible
- our 'walk on by' culture is to blame
- children ought to report anti-social behaviour

Thanks, God,
Sanne








Do I get 10M ?

LOL, paying people to do such an easy essay ^.^

pm'd it to you

seriously? if your gonna pay people to do your work for you. whats the point in going to school?

You Might aswell get your rank back and host 12+hrs a day.

2x6 I Win wrote:seriously? if your gonna pay people to do your work for you. whats the point in going to school?

You Might aswell get your rank back and host 12+hrs a day.

cause maybe he doesnt want to do it, this essay wasnt really an essay you learn somthing on its your own personal opinion, and if he can make 30m+ hosting in the time spent writing this essay it would be more time efficient to pay sombody 10m and make 20m.

Maca Skill wrote:

2x6 I Win wrote:seriously? if your gonna pay people to do your work for you. whats the point in going to school?

You Might aswell get your rank back and host 12+hrs a day.

cause maybe he doesnt want to do it, this essay wasnt really an essay you learn somthing on its your own personal opinion, and if he can make 30m+ hosting in the time spent writing this essay it would be more time efficient to pay sombody 10m and make 20m.

you go to school to learn new shit. If he needs help he can always ask this teacher.
Im just saying you gonna pay Pennys for the stuff you dont get irl?

lol every time I see 2x6 posted something I know it's some kind of rage post XD

lol ikr christina. But im just saying people go to school to learn and get help if they need it. maybe if sanne was asking someone to help him for 10m like give him some help to start it or that. But asking to right a whole essay... what are you gonna learn from it? nothing. Im just saying sanne can do what he wants but thats how i feel like.

@ sanne, ill do it. @2x6, umad?

Nah im not mad. i dont care what he does in life its his fault. im just saying he can't say nobody told him i shouldn't of paid for my school work to me done.

deadline pass a long time ago,

tnx for the help. Zololord9 and host devine helped me x

2x6 I Win wrote:seriously? if your gonna pay people to do your work for you. whats the point in going to school?

You Might aswell get your rank back and host 12+hrs a day.

Oh i had to make 2, thought 1 was enough.